Georg Trakl
In the evening the autumnal forests tint
Of deadly weapons, the golden plains
And blue lakes, above them the sun
Gloomy rolls down; embraces the night
Dying warriors, the wild lament
their broken mouths.
But still gathers in the willow ground
Red clouds in which an angry god dwells
The spilled blood, moon coolness;
All roads lead to black decay.
Under the golden branches of the night and stars
The sister’s shadow staggers through the silent grove,
To salute the ghosts of heroes, the bleeding heads;
And the dark flutes of autumn sound softly in the pipe.
O prouder sorrow! you bronze altars
The hot flame of the spirit feeds a tremendous pain today,
The unborn grandchildren.
At evening the autumn woodlands ring
With deadly weapons. Over the golden plains
And lakes of blue, the sun
More dark rolls. The night surrounds
Warriors dying and the wild lament
Of their fragmented mouths.
Yet silently there gather in the willow combe
Red clouds inhabited by an angry god,
Shed blood, and the chill of the moon.
All roads lead to black decay.
Under golden branches of the night and stars
A sister’s shadow sways through the still grove
To greet the heroes’ spirits, the bloodied heads.
And softly in the reeds Autumn’s dark flutes resound.
O proud mourning! – You brazen altars,
The spirit’s hot flame is now fed by a tremendous pain:
The grandsons, unborn.
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In the evening the autumn woods sound
with deadly weapons, the golden valleys
and blue lakes, over which the sun
gloomily rolls back; the night encircles
Dying warriors, wild lamentations
erupting from their mouths.
Certainly silence gathers in the willow banks
of red clouds, where an angry God lives
the forgotten blood of ourselves, cooled by the moonlight;
every street falls into black decay.
Under golden twigs the night and stars
wave the shadows of sisters through the silent wood,
to greet the ghosts of heroes, the bloody heads,
and soft sound in the woods of the dark flutes of autumn.
proud sorrows! On your noble altars
the burning flame of the souls is nourished now by the power of pain,
future descendants unborn.
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Analysis (AI Assisted)
This poem vividly captures the bleak, haunting beauty of a war-torn autumn landscape, juxtaposing the natural world with the harrowing consequences of human conflict. Through its imagery and tone, it conveys a profound sense of loss, mourning, and the enduring echoes of violence.
The opening lines immerse the reader in an evening scene where the golden plains and blue lakes, often symbols of peace and abundance, are overshadowed by the ominous presence of “deadly weapons.” The natural cycle of day giving way to night mirrors the encroachment of death upon the battlefield, as “dying warriors” lament with “fragmented mouths.” The phrase evokes both physical destruction and the broken cries of the fallen, resonating with grief.
Central to the poem is the motif of red clouds, described as the dwelling place of an “angry god.” This image suggests that the spilled blood and the pain of war have summoned a divine wrath, adding a layer of mythic and spiritual significance. The moon’s chill and the roads leading to “black decay” intensify the sense of inevitability and despair, as if all paths from this violence lead to destruction and death.
Amid this devastation, the poem introduces the shadow of a sister walking through a silent grove, greeting the spirits of fallen heroes. Her presence adds a personal, human touch to the scene, embodying grief and remembrance. The “dark flutes of autumn” accompanying her journey further underscore the somber mood, blending the natural sounds of the season with an elegy for the dead.
The closing lines shift the focus to mourning and its connection to future generations. The “brazen altars” symbolize the enduring pain and sacrifices of war, with the “flame of the spirit” fed by immense suffering. The mention of “unborn grandchildren” ties the present tragedy to an uncertain future, suggesting that the scars of conflict will echo beyond the immediate moment.
The poem is both a lament and a warning, merging vivid, melancholic imagery with reflections on the enduring impact of war. It captures the tension between nature’s beauty and humanity’s violence, urging readers to confront the cost of conflict and honor the memories of those lost.